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For You (from your own worst enemy)
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 03:09:07 PM in AEST
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You are stronger , much stronger than me,
For I am weak, I hide inside you, you see,
You face reality, I goad you for that,
Why, cos I am jealous, that is the fact,
For you say I give you fear, well thats just me,
I want to be special, someone like you, you see,
I am the dark shadow, that wakes you at night,
But you are courageous and will put up a fight,
My voice it whispers in your ear,
Sometimes reducing you to tears,
But crowd me out , with music and fun,
I will realise , that again you have won,
I am the one who holds you back,
But you can stop me in my tracks,
Just say I can and I will and must,
You will break the chain for it will rust,
I may depress you, but you are unique,
No second voice do you seek,
So turf me out, Get your confidence back,
For what you gain, I will lack,
I am your nightmare, so live your dream,
Take away my frown, Your face will beam,
Tie down the guilt, You are good as new,
I am ashamed for hurting you,
Close the door to your past,Open new ones somehow,
Don't let me in, for I am the spineless one now,
Be true to yourself, For now you are just one,.
And me your worst enemy, I will be gone.
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jerseysue
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Re: For You (from your own worst enemy)
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 03:42:52 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. The rhyme scheme was held for the most part, and the message was quite nice, and powerful even. Nice work, thanks for posting |
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Re: For You (from your own worst enemy)
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 04:06:43 PM AEST
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| Sue thank you will always keep this so I can read it and remember thease wise words, thank you for taking the time to respond and being such a good friend..Its a beautiful poem and you are a brilliant poet to write it in such a short time..xxxxx |
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Re: For You (from your own worst enemy)
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 12:13:05 PM AEST
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| I like this. very good. |
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Re: For You (from your own worst enemy)
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 10:41:13 PM AEST
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Such wise words by a very special Miss. A nice reply to LillyJanes poem dearest Sue~ You're a real confidence booster you know that. You inspire the reader to believe in themselves. You go girl~ Well done and thanks so much for posting this.
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: For You (from your own worst enemy)
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 04:31:57 PM AEST
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I read lillyjane's poem and you are obviously a great friend.
This is absolutely a brilliant and wonderful answer to that poem.
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