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Rebuilding
Contributed by
spazz911
on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 02:57:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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darkened shadows cast by the trees of light
guiding soflty those souls lost by night
showing calmly the way that is near
to take their hand slowly, lead them away from here
breathing strength into their poor, battered lungs
giving them hope that their lifes not yet done
teaching them patience, for recovery's time
giving more seconds to decide their own mind
never resting untill they know the truth
that one broken spirit can be rebuilt into two
that even the wors of disasters, the hardest of falls
can be repieced together, restrenghtened their walls
the price of this truth about rebirth and reliving
is only the cost of the time of the giving
survivers pay back their untimely debt
by showing the others who've fallen the rest
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2006-07-24 14:57:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rebuilding
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 03:29:51 PM AEST (User
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Nice post you have here. The rhymes were pretty good, and the idea was quite good too. Nice work. |
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