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Just love
Contributed by
ManInTheMask
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Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 02:30:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You add to my life making it more worth while.
The sweetest thing your beautiful smile.
So pure, honest, luscious and deep.
Making my heart skip or even leap.
Something so simple, yet complex.
All disappears, with kisses along your neck.
Nothing in life matters in that moment in time.
Such beauty, so precious, Immense, Divine.
With you, all my troubles seem a distant past.
A love so pure, will surely last?
Each moment I cherish, adore and love.
A blessing, perhaps from the sky above?
So taking each day as it will come.
A Happy smile never feeling glum.
People doubt, what they don’t understand.
Still we glide hand in hand.
Who knows where this will end?
It scares me a little I shall not pretend.
I shall jump, even though I cannot fly.
As you carry me on this cloud so high.
All I can do is promise you this.
My deepest love with the softest kiss.
Best of friends, pure and true.
I’ll smile bright till I’m next with you.
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ManInTheMask
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2006-07-24 14:30:01]
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Re: Just love
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by Sagefairy on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 02:41:13 PM AEST
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Lovely this. I know how it feels, though I choose not to be with him at this time. This poem's measure is as soft as the feeling it portrays. Very nice work.
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Re: Just love
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 04:41:12 PM AEST
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This poem is so lovely. And like the words of an old Platters song.
Why do I love you, I love you for not only for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you:
Love makes us smile, and this poem certainly makes me feel happy. Sue x |
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Re: Just love
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by luckycharm on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 04:45:53 PM AEST
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| I LOVE THIS POEM! It is really touching and very sweet. Keep writing!.-luckycharm |
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Re: Just love
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 12:04:54 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. How love should be. |
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