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Loneliness
Contributed by
PatchAdams
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Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lonely heart beats deeply within my soul, while the empty hours kill my mind turning my whole world dark and grey,
Felling numb in the knowledge that somehow I have lost my way..
Can a person live so long without sweet blessed love? , left cold and lifeless as a shell, washed faceless and featureless by the waves, dissowned upon some dusty shelf.
Where did I go wrong? why do I continiously recite this woeful song.
Are old romantics doomed to die, their life to end under a lonely sky, and though I gave so much love and joy away, why then must I sit in sadness today, nothing returned....
Deep coarse lines now etched across my brow, where my eyes are now red raw from the sea of tears I have shed, and thoughsome warmth and hope I strive to find, my wound is too deep and my heart now feels dead.
Sleep, eternal sleep, my only comfort..
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2003-02-10 17:40:00]
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Re: Loneliness
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 06:51:00 PM AEST
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| I'd like to say I know what its like, but it's a little more cliche`than I'm going to allow myself. I do think old romantics have lived out there time, being one myself, and I dont think Ive heard the feeling described more perfectly. An excellent job. |
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Re: Loneliness
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by angel71 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 07:20:43 PM AEST
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| Believe it or not some of us do still appreciate romance, well I know I do. This was very touching, good work :) |
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Re: Loneliness
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 08:03:41 PM AEST
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| awww.. the surest way to lonesome is to always speak the truth and from your heart and soul... your poem speaks volumes... hugs nessa |
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Re: Loneliness
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 06:00:55 AM AEST
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this brought tears to my eyes, when im lonely i seem to cut myself, to see if im still alive i guess
amazing
xxx |
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