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I need love
Contributed by
jono
on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 08:12:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I need someone
who I can love
who understands
Who doesn't judge
were I can go
in times of need
if they need suport
I hope they'll come to me
who I can kiss
and I can hug
who doesn't leave
when life get's tough
We'll help ourselfes out
when were in need
and I'll love her
and she'll love me
she'll be the one
she'll be the best
and we'll be happier
than all the rest
but will it happen to me I'm just a little loser
Copyright ©
jono
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2006-07-24 08:12:16] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I need love
(User Rating: 1 ) by chaos78 on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 09:16:25 AM AEST (User
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just wait and see love is out there for everybody and u shouldn't think of yourself as a loser good write GOD BLESS |
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Re: I need love
(User Rating: 1 ) by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 10:15:31 AM AEST (User
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Your not a loser or you would not of written such a lovely poem. xxx |
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Re: I need love
(User Rating: 1 ) by kttykttywfreckls on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 01:32:11 PM AEST (User
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Excelent write... |
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Re: I need love
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 01:16:01 PM AEST (User
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WELCOME TO YPDC Jono.........so nice to have you aboard!!!
Few words but with a big impact!
Your poetry is lovely, keep up the good work, come back and do it again.
Warm love
consue
P.S. Nice to meet you Jono.......... |
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Re: I need love
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 03:05:34 PM AEST (User
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that was so awesome...i love it. yes, i need love too...badly.
great poem |
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