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I Beg Of You
Contributed by
Lips
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Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 01:48:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Ardently wishing
Feverishly wanting
Caressing thoughts
Fondled emotions
Yet prudently I lay idle
Forfeiting my great dreams
Palindromos ordinariness
Longing for a forgotten finesse
Betrothed to a demanding society
Besotted by those not accepted
Daringly beseech thee
For I long to be challenged
Take me from my bosom of comfort
Make me playth with thine ways
Don't let me waste another minute
In my idyllic malaise
Copyright ©
Lips
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2006-07-24 01:48:45]
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Re: I Beg Of You
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 01:59:59 AM AEST
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| eloquent...... |
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Re: I Beg Of You
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 02:32:54 AM AEST
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| A very good write, and a joy to read. I loved it . Sue x |
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Re: I Beg Of You
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 03:44:44 AM AEST
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very abstract... im not sure i knew exactly what u were saying with this but i like that... its kinda mysterious and leaves it up to the reader.... nice job:)
~Lo |
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Re: I Beg Of You
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 09:45:34 AM AEST
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Wonderfully penned piece. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: I Beg Of You
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by Lips on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 04:17:13 PM AEST
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I guess this is meant to show the longing of wanting to get out of our comfortable rut, yet feel obliged n many ways to follow social/family rules and sometimes forget to go and discover ourselves!
Thankyou all for commenting :D |
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Re: I Beg Of You
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by Lips on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 04:17:16 PM AEST
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I guess this is meant to show the longing of wanting to get out of our comfortable rut, yet feel obliged n many ways to follow social/family rules and sometimes forget to go and discover ourselves!
Thankyou all for commenting :D |
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