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Feeling Lovely
Contributed by
Sann971
on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:29:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I hear the sound
I see the sight
I smell the scent
I love the light
I am sick
I am well
I am good
I am bad
If I win
or if I lose
I am always to be
complicated and confused
When I am with you
there is no news
no confound complications
or words of amuse
There is only Love
and Love is now
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2006-07-23 21:29:44]
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Re: Feeling Lovely
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:36:55 PM AEST
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i liked this.
especially this stanza:
"If I win
or if I lose
I am always to be
complicated and confused"
and the ending was unexpected and sweet. good job!
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Re: Feeling Lovely
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 02:11:36 AM AEST
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| really good rythym and rhyme. |
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Re: Feeling Lovely
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 06:31:36 AM AEST
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| Short but so sweet love it. xxx |
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