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Relay For Life
Contributed by
MrPerfect
on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:36:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Playig Frisbee
walking 5 miles
Quoting movies
sitting around a fire
Sacrificing a Nickleback Concert
Staying up all night
Slamming a Tall boy of Amp
at 1:30am
getting beat at volleyball
6 to 21
in five minutes
Cousin Electrical taping his shorts up
Listening to the worst country singer
Ever
Having not slept in 24 hours
trying to sleep but have Powerhouse gym
Poke into your brain like a needle
Making fun of family
Dedicating the whole night to Cancer survivors
and people taken by cancer
listening to the Church band play
playing with yo-yo's all night
figuring out that i would rather have
$500,000 dollars in Penny Candy
than a Ferrari
Priceless
Copyright ©
MrPerfect
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2006-07-23 20:36:52]
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Re: Relay For Life
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:24:01 PM AEST
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| By the time I got done readin' this I was stressed and worn out. Sounds like a lot of the energy came from the inspiration of servin' others. And, bout the worst country singer ever, that wasn't true! Ya ain't heard me sing country yet. Enjoyable, kinda presented how coherency diminishes in relation to the lack o' zzzzzzzs. |
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Re: Relay For Life
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:25:10 PM AEST
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| it sounds like a wonderful expierence. i really liked how you described your night, its just so real. ordinary things seem that much more important because of tone of your poem. what a nickelback concert when you can save a life, right? great job on the poem and on taking time from your day to go to this! |
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