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Heat Wave
Contributed by
RLWildPassions
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Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:49:35 PM in AEST
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It’s summer; it’s hot
Not liking it a lot
My brain is fried
No snowing outside-
Trying to write poems
My mind, it roams
As I view in-between
A TV commercial scene-
With turned off sound
Perhaps soon, I am bound
To get something on paper
I must look deeper
On TV, or in my mind, I have no clue
What either are saying, what can I do
Cable’s turned off here
Oh well, at least snow’s there-
Suddenly, a voice came through
I heard it say, ‘I am with you!’
It did not come from TV-
Yet it spoke to me
It said, ‘the weather will cool down-
And your words, they will be found-
As far as your TV
I am very sorry
Now, write about snow
Topped off with ice
You’ll feel cool--- and you know-
Soon two pictures will look rather nice!’
RaquelLeah DuPont
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Re: Heat Wave
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:57:39 AM AEST
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We live by our perceptions, as the mind perceives of things so we speak and write.
Of course He is also the master of consciousness without which we could not perceive at all, - and He is Lord over it all.
The mind, being inferior to the spirit is just a channel of a certain state.in flux.
You bring that out masterfully, whether conscious of it or not.
Wonderful poem.!
Hugs
Elizabeth
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Re: Heat Wave
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 06:37:48 AM AEST
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| I know the feeling its to hot and its hard to concentrate.. Great poem xxx |
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Re: Heat Wave
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by jono on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 07:57:49 AM AEST
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'm melting with the heat
great poem |
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Re: Heat Wave
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by enamat on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 10:11:30 AM AEST
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| great choice of words, I completely identify |
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Re: Heat Wave
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 07:09:52 AM AEST
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hummm? nice poem as usual, but snow? bahh humbug, lol AC ahh now that's better lovely peice nevertheless.
((((Raquel))))
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Re: Heat Wave
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 11:59:38 PM AEST
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Lol heat wave is right
it was 103 today in minnesota even.
anyways good write
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Re: Heat Wave
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by RLWildPassions on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 12:15:49 AM AEST
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Thank You! Here we have evolved, never-the-less-
From reality...to technology...
Nice combination...
A token sought first...BC
RaquelLeah:D |
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