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THE PAIN
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kttykttywfreckls
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Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 04:50:20 PM in AEST
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When will it fade? When will it die? I pray every day to be set free from the pain he left us to live with. To be be free from tthe painful memories of my past mistakes. I want to be free from this pain that holds me prisoner. And from the prive me and my children have paid for these terrible past mistakes. How dearly they have paid for my errors. Why can't the MONSTERS who bring the pain be the ones to pay the awful price?! Why can't they suffer from it? ! Why are the victims the ones who pay the dearest of all?! The pain belongs to the monsters... It is their garden of pain, thier crop of destruction, they should reap the compounded intrest of their deeds. And they should FEEL the pain they have planted and tended so furiously, for it is of their own design... The pain is really theirs for all time! LET them feel it for all eternity, NOT the INNOCENT who have been victimized MERCILESSLY!
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Re: THE PAIN
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 05:13:35 PM AEST
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its a good write. Its real and speaks the truth. it shouldn't be the innocent that have to pay the price.
hope you come out of the dark times soon.
luvs ya!
Jess |
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Re: THE PAIN
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by Manda2 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:22:15 PM AEST
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| I'm so sorry for your pain, remember what goes around comes around. I know that's true because I've seen it. There is justice afterall and you will see or hear about it. |
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Re: THE PAIN
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:49:02 PM AEST
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| i sort of get what you mean my dad damaged my life for a long time .. he messed me and my mum up with his alcoholic behaviour .. only words real was evil .. i really feel sorry for your children they are the real victims here so innocent and to be treated so bad its unforgivable .. great write i really felt it .. im sorry love han xx |
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Re: THE PAIN
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 10:16:49 PM AEST
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the pain is well represented through your words, as it read it i can almost envision the screaming and the tears. great job.
and if you find the answer to the question why the good suffer..let me know.
keep up the great work |
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Re: THE PAIN
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 12:22:03 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for all the pain and suffering you and ur children endured while you were with this man. What goes around comes around. I wish u and ur children much brighter and happier days ahead. The best of wishes to u and urs.
hugs n prayers,
sue m |
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Re: THE PAIN
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:15:33 AM AEST
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| You are so right the victims suffer they dont, another I can relate to its a brilliant xx |
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Re: THE PAIN
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:18:16 AM AEST
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| Sorry meant to say a brilliant write, it stirred up some emotions in me and im missing out words.xxx |
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Re: THE PAIN
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by Bizzy on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 03:17:43 PM AEST
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Dear Freckles, LIFE IS NOT FAIR, BUT GOD IS GOOD.
You write well and it is great therapy; I testify to that!
I'm much older than you, have had alot of problems, too. I spent years of being in the blues, not knowing how to find the sunshine again. It became a habit for me to think of the bad stuff and churn it around and around.
I'm just now learning how to change the negative thoughts to positive thoughts. It makes me happier in all situations to think that way.
My motto now is Bloom Where You Are!
An easy exercise to avoid depression is this.
As soon as you wake, turn up the corners of your mouth. Like magic, your brain takes a lighter approach.
You can use that throughout the day as soon as you start feeling bad or notice a negative attitude.
Best wishes. Bizzy |
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