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End of August
Contributed by
epsftbllchic1617
on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 11:34:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In the end of August you broke my heart
In the end of August is when we fell apart
In the end of August is when my life took a turn
In the end of August is when I felt real heart burn
The pain lasted through out the fall
When I never heard your voice or received a call
The pain lasted through out the winter
When it was cold, and I was bitter
The pain lasted through out the spring
When flowers bloomed and birds would sing
Although the summer has gone by fast
I still remember our vast past
Last August is when you broke my heart
Last august is when I fell apart
The end of July is approaching quick
This August I no longer will be heart sick
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Re: End of August
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 01:16:59 PM AEST
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| nice. |
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Re: End of August
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by jono on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 01:49:55 PM AEST
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| clever a whole year cycle. |
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Re: End of August
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by The_Young_Poet on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:20:01 PM AEST
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| nice, you described how you felt through all the seasons. Very good. |
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Re: End of August
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by Keilantra on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:35:09 PM AEST
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ha, good write, i like how you address your heartache throughout the poem, then at the end say that you will no longer be captive to it.
xXx
~kei |
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Re: End of August
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by evolon on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:32:12 PM AEST
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| full circle ...nice |
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Re: End of August
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 08:36:10 PM AEST
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| I was in this exact same place 2 years ago. It brought back alot of memories, believe me, i wish i had forgotten, but it's always there when you love someone that much. A very compelling compilation for me. Thankyou for posting this, and i hope you can get through this as i have. Take care, Kimberly |
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Re: End of August
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by chulysnacky on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 08:57:59 PM AEST
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| very natural and full of emotion, great write, I enjoy reading poems like this. I too shared a similar experience and it's not easy, but time heals all.!!! |
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Re: End of August
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by chulysnacky on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 08:59:23 PM AEST
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| very natural and full of emotion, great write, I enjoy reading poems like this. I too shared a similar experience and it's not easy, but time heals all.!!! My birthday happens to be in august. |
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