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A Sinner's Requiem
Contributed by
Immortal-Dragon21
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Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:47:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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A Sinner’s Requiem
On the bitter street of long forgotten memories
Silently, slowly the rain falls
Beneath the neon halo
Of a flickering light
There on the cold steel table of reality he lay
His legs broken, His eyes removed
Helpless to the cruel & unforgiving world
Society’s fallen angel, once so pure
Now defiled by the markings of sin
Awaiting a chance for a final salvation
The room: a cell to bind him
Mother: a fond memory
Father: the judge who sentences him
A sinner’s life: the executioner to kill him
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Re: A Sinner's Requiem
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by deadclown on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 03:54:56 AM AEST
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| Thought this had a lot of potential to be a good poem. Nicely written but it felt like there should've been more to read. Bit rushed. Would u consider a re-write or maybe an extension on it? |
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Re: A Sinner's Requiem
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:30:52 AM AEST
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Good write. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: A Sinner's Requiem
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by Faust on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 11:56:22 PM AEST
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I sinner's life may kill him but I've had fun on the way down.
Eternally Punished,
Faust |
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