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one hell of a love scar
Contributed by
MiZzUnDaZtOoD
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Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:37:09 AM in AEST
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It appeared when you disappeared.
You was my wound!!
When you left it came.
Sitting in the corners of my room feeling sorry for myself crying ,shaking,wiping my nose asking myself over & over...
What did i do? What didnt i do? Thinking of answers and ways to get you back.... For what just to go through all this again? Why? Why put myself through it? Make myself sick? Just in hopes to get your attention for a short period of time!?
Let him go ..Be strong.. you deserve much better .. In time it will get better!
Get better?? How long do i have to wait?
How do i trust again? when do i let my feelings show?
& let my gaurd down? Will i love again? Will someone love me back?
This is crazy... Im talkin to myself...
HOLD ON A MIN!! I need a cigarette!!
I dont know how much more i can take! Im trying to deal...
When will this go away? Maybe someday?
I dunno i hope but this is one hell of a LOVE SCAR!....
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Re: one hell of a love scar
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by Immortal-Dragon21 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 03:12:26 AM AEST
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| this is a good tale of loss it took me back to times when i was upset for the same reason powerful work |
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Re: one hell of a love scar
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by kttykttywfreckls on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:05:42 PM AEST
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| yes every one has at least one of these.... dejavu. |
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Re: one hell of a love scar
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 02:56:29 PM AEST
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Don't give up dear. You wouldn't be sitting there feeling so badly, if your relationship with him was pretty!
You must kiss many frogs before you find your wonderful Prince.....someone who will not leave you, but love you very much!
Wonderful feeling poem
Warm love
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Re: one hell of a love scar
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by evolon on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 06:03:57 PM AEST
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theres no cure for the pain, all you can do is let it run it path, cus at the end of it all bumps and bruises will show and then you'll find the 1 person willing to be there understanding and all... trust me we all walked this road just rem.. ya not alone ....nice write keep it up.....
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