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A Cloudy Day
Contributed by
kttykttywfreckls
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Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 05:02:33 PM in AEST
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When the clouds are full,dark and damp. There seems to be shadows all around. It's hard to focus the mind and energy seems hard to find. All you can do is make the most of such a serious day. The clouds will pass and the skies will clear. Making things right for the sun to shine brightly once again. Then nature responds with birds singing sweetly and hearts open like flowers blooming after a long dark winter....
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Re: A Cloudy Day
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by doug on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 11:07:12 PM AEST
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| I think you feel for sun what I feel for the clouds. Two people feeling the same love for two opposite things. I'm a long dark winter person I suppose , however , the last line is quite lovely. hearts open like flowers blooming... take care , doug |
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Re: A Cloudy Day
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 03:21:01 PM AEST
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| I agree with Doug I also prefer the clouds it goes with my melancholy mind. Good write and the sun did shine thru and bring joy thru the words. Thank for your comment on my write and take care….Steve |
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Re: A Cloudy Day
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by RLWildPassions on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 07:01:12 PM AEST
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| Yes. Nice poem. All worth the wait for the sun, and when it comes out again, its most appreciative. Nice analogy on cloudy days write.. |
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