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The Stranger
Contributed by
xxTiaxx
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Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 04:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I see him watching me from across the room
His eyes follow my body
They outline my every curve
Then our eyes meet
A smile comes across his face
And he approaches
An immediate connection
An act of God
This is no accident
Now he watches me from across the room
His eyes follow my body
They outline my every curve
I am in love with this man
Copyright ©
xxTiaxx
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2006-07-22 16:19:51]
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Re: The Stranger
(User Rating: 1 )
by sohangme on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 04:52:42 PM AEST
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| Good job....keep it up |
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Re: The Stranger
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 08:28:25 PM AEST
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| i think it was a good poem but the ending could have been more creative, you had me intrigued and then it just ended so suddendly..keep it up though!! |
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Re: The Stranger
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by a7x36 on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 12:01:30 AM AEST
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| short but sweet |
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