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Starry Night
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 09:48:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I see stars
way above the cars
Laid out like diamonds
on a black velvet cloth
Rippling and swirling
melting rhythms of
endlessness
Crystal reflection
cosmical
Night air black
moist and tenacious
encircling every earthly
object it touches
with gentle behavior
in slumbrous flow
Mist rises
Condensation ensconces earth
Caught in grey smoke
puffing and billowing
House lights draped
like the
twinkling firefly shines
in a glass mason jar
Inspiration of the night
deeply fills my lungs
Dew and cellular structure
all becoming one
Web of geometrics
weaving in and out
of perfection
Laura Horner
July 2006
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Re: Starry Night
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by Ruby2sdy on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 09:51:16 AM AEST
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| Oh this is lovely! Such imagery! I could taste the night, not only see it, you have painted it so wonderfully! Thanks for sharing, 2sdyx |
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Re: Starry Night
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 08:48:32 PM AEST
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sis this left me with such a wonderful peaceful feeling. thanks for stirring such emotions this is beautiful!!
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Re: Starry Night
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by Willofree on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:57:01 PM AEST
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Laura,
I love the the way this poems flows, and the imagery is wonderful. I get a picture of sitting in a car on a bluff over looking the city. The white headlights and red tail lights form streaks of light. And it is as if these lights connect with the stars and endless dark skies. All the lights twinkle and flow and create a cosmic dance.
Beautiful write, my friend
Will |
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Re: Starry Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 11:41:24 PM AEST
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You've depicted the very essence of natural scheme in this little masterpeice portraying
the wonderment of nature. beautifuly done my
sister laura.
peace2u my friend.
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Re: Starry Night
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by Immortal-Dragon21 on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 01:54:18 PM AEST
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| this is a very beautiful piece so calming and fluid it all rolls into place exactly where it should absoulte excelence |
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Re: Starry Night
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 05:57:53 PM AEST
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Laura .. gorgeous write hun! so peaceful and serene..
I especially loved these lines ..
"with gentle behavior
in slumbrous flow"
Gosh, that's just beautiful DH!!
I love your nature pieces ... completely breathtaking ..
~MG
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Re: Starry Night
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by Spike on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:16:36 AM AEST
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Hey Laura, those moments are magical under the stars, aren't they?. Especially with no other light to dull the constellations. Sent a wave of delicious recognition washing over me.
Spike |
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Re: Starry Night
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 05:11:39 PM AEST
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laden with vivid imagery.. very peacful as well, this write - you brought me along for the ride.
Billy |
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Re: Starry Night
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by Ramfire on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 10:10:49 AM AEST
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Great word pictures. Keep that creative ink flowing.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: Starry Night
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 12:58:21 AM AEST
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Very beautiful Laurabeam!!!! Has a nice touch of gentleness and fresh air. Very nice.
Timbro
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Re: Starry Night
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 01:09:11 AM AEST
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| Holy moly, this was awesome. I could see it all in my mind's eye, you've got a real knack for imagery, I must say. Your choice of words was quite vivid, it made the whole thing give off such a nice...feeling. I didn't want to use the word 'aura' there, as I'm not sure it would have been the right word. I really enjoyed this, very impressive Laura! |
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Re: Starry Night
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 03:19:07 PM AEST
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Laura, I love this image ...
"House lights draped
like the
twinkling firefly shines
in a glass mason jar"
A fabulous metaphore. The write was beautiful as well dear.
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Re: Starry Night
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 01:40:15 AM AEST
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"Written on a late night ride", eh? Well, then... I suppose all I need to do to tell you how well you conveyed the moment is confess that I'd have undoubtedly been inclined to pull that car over and lay back on the hood.... and spend the rest of the night right there staring at the incredible sky.
Well done!
~Snemmy
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Re: Starry Night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 05:41:16 PM AEST
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I love the night too. Some wonderful language and metaphor used here. The reference to fireflys is a poweful image. beautiful sonics.
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Re: Starry Night
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 12:32:12 AM AEST
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wow Laurabean i am impress with this write.
Night air black
moist and tenacious
encircling every earthly
object it touches
with gentle behavior
in slumbrous flow
i just really like that part.
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Re: Starry Night
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by Willofree on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 10:04:39 AM AEST
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Very awesome in its vivid imagery. It's if i'm right there sharing in your experience. I really like the line "Web of geometrics weaving in and out..... of perfection"
Well done my friend
Will |
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Re: Starry Night
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by JockPhillips on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 10:47:56 AM AEST
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| Yes! A night scene with light stars and other sources of light. Mist. I like the topic and the execution of the poem is good. |
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Re: Starry Night
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by SerenePsycho on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 07:11:02 AM AEST
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| I love this one! The description and imagery is incredible. This paints such a beautiful picture. Nice word choices. I like the flow and the feeling of mystery or beyond earthliness it conveys. |
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Re: Starry Night
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:53:18 AM AEST
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| I love how all your words flow together smoothly, and how I can see the imagery in the night sky. You write great nature poems! |
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Re: Starry Night
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 03:52:01 AM AEST
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this poem radiates in beauty...
love n' hugs nessa
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