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Smoke and Mirrors
Contributed by
Tanna
on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The distant sounds of thunder
Rumble slowly through my mind
Forgotten thoughts now touched on
Behind a wall, no longer confined
Reality infused with fantasy
A sickening little twist
My fondest wish, my hearts desire
Enshrouded in a heavy mist
I once thought I could have it all
Now I realize it was all just smoke and mirrors
What a fool I was to believe
Alone, I face my deepest fears
The past is ever lost
The future never clear
Destination unknown, engulfed in smoke
What will the mirror reflect when I get there?
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2003-02-10 13:00:00]
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 01:23:27 PM AEST
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Tanna,God write here Yes things often look like an illusion at times,I know this feeling!
Christina |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:13:32 PM AEST
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| if you had it all to do over again, would you? if you had all the news of the future laid before you, would you read it? |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:37:37 PM AEST
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| i thoroughly love this poem... great form and very "home-hitting"... excellent poem... |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:24:30 AM AEST
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a wonderful poem, strong imagery
emotion strong ...awwesome
well done
peace be your journey
terry |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 02:39:37 PM AEST
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Wonderfully woven, Tanna... This is gooood!!
Jenni |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 03:31:39 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this immensely very strong writing. I'm sure a lot of ppl can relate to this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Smoke and Mirrors
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by JAJnex on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 09:44:12 PM AEST
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The past is ever lost
The future never clear........
and the present is always here!
great poem, "i like'd it a-lot" |
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