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Memory
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 10:28:35 PM in AEST
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in this place of pain,
I long to escape.
A sweet memory of joy,
taken so tragically from me.
Hate lingers in this fuzzy place,
a misunderstanding between God and I.
no exit door though so I endure,
sleep brings those dreams,
wake and drift off again to the same place.
A prisoner ever since the ones that I loved,
were swept out to sea.
I have no boat, and I can't swim to that place,
incessantly staring at the ocean,
searching the horizon and looking for a note in an old bottle.
nothing ever comes with the waves but those memories.
they sting my eyes
and penetrate my soul.
suffering to find the answer and screaming 5 names!
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outdoorsman
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2006-07-20 22:28:35]
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Re: Memory
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by shelby on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 08:53:58 PM AEST
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A touching write that made me hang on each word. Nicely done but Im sorry for your pain.
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Re: Memory
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 20th March 2007 @ 08:03:59 AM AEST
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| Sad but beautifully written piece. |
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