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Passion
Contributed by
fayray
on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 01:50:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I look across the room,
and see you lying there.
I long to hold you in my hands,
and learn all you have to share.
Together you and I can go
to another land,
to another time unknown
to an ignorant woman or man.
For hours we sit
and much is said.
When twilight comes,
I take you to my bed.
We lay there together
with a dim light on.
Sometimes we stay this way
'til the crack of dawn.
And when I'm through with you,
like all the rest
you'll stay in my mind
along with the best.
I close your cover
and wish you good health,
then I gently return you
to the book shelf.
Copyright ©
fayray
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2006-07-20 13:50:10]
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Re: Passion
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by doug on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 04:50:00 PM AEST
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I liked the twist of this poem. You had me fooled quite well. I was just hoping for something different and you provided.
take care , doug |
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Re: Passion
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by carebear_06 on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 12:05:01 AM AEST
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| i liked this poem. it had a different ending then you think it would. nice right |
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Re: Passion
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 01:15:56 AM AEST
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What a unique piece ! It's refreshing to read something so different, yet beautifully expressed. Thank you for posting, it was a joy to read =)
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