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one wish just for you
Contributed by
jono
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Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 01:40:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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if you had just one wish
one out of them all
would it be for something simple
or something much much more
would it be for money
but that leads to greed
or maybe for true power
and to become the lead
would it be for true love
what we have all searcherd for
or maybe for great peace
and never to have fought
I know is just fantasy
but imagine it was true
that if you had just one wish
one wish just for you
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jono
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2006-07-20 13:40:14]
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Re: one wish just for you
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 01:44:58 PM AEST
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Good points... I could never be sure what that one wish would be for me....
Welcome to YPDC....Hope you enjoy it here.
Jenni
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Re: one wish just for you
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by doug on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 06:42:12 PM AEST
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| Had I one wish , I would wish that my wish not be granted. This one thing just to see the evil controlling forces of this universe collapse in the wrecthed confusion of their creations ability to create paradox. We all know Gods confused us enough . Well , turn about is fair play. Good poem. take care , doug |
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Re: one wish just for you
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 07:30:01 PM AEST
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| Nice, this poem makes you think |
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