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Sometimes
Contributed by
baronhawk
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Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 09:24:46 AM in AEST
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Sometimes I would lie awake
and pace the halls at night
thinking about you babe
and this tender love inside
Sometimes I would walk the streets
in the day to pass the time
still thinking of your sweet
smile and lovely shine
Sometimes I wonder why
this love I feel inside
these feelings that I have
the beatings of my heart
Sometimes I would catch your eye
in the rearview mirror when you drive
as you run those hands of yours
across your hair and sigh
Sometimes I would close my eyes
and dream that you were mine
wishing that those tender looks
belong to me this time
Sometimes I hope you realize
all this I feel inside
but I know that your heart lies
to a luckier man than I
Sometimes I would try
to live and let die
but this feelings gonna grow
and maybe its best that I go
Sometimes I think I'll stay
for even with my wasted heart
I would rather be near
to see you smile each day
Sometimes I feel like giving up
and surrender to this fate
it is enough to see you near
enough to ease my pain
Sometimes, somewhere somehow
I wish that you'd be here
sometimes, somewhere, somehow
I wish upon a star
Sometimes its just as well
this is just a tale to tell
sometimes it rains, it shines
love is too often blind.
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baronhawk
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Re: Sometimes
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 01:00:52 AM AEST
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You're "Sometimes" are just lovely dreams Baronhawk. And the best part of your "Sometimes" poem is the ending, for such is life for all of us. Into every person's life there is rain.............but sometimes Baronhawk, if you wait a little spell........the sun shines through........even when you and love are blind! I hope your every wish comes true!
Warm love
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Re: Sometimes
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by Silent-No-More on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 01:07:48 AM AEST
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I think (though, admittedly, I am no expert in... well... you *wink) there is always a ribbon of melancholy woven through your writes. It is most obvious, perhaps, in your pieces that speak of longing and unrequitted love... but, I believe it is embedded not-so-obviously elsewhere as well. I eagerly await the day, my friend, that I no longer sense it there (for I am certain it is to come). In the interim, I'll come, I'll read, I'll sigh, and I'll wish for you all that you desire just as I did/do upon reading this piece.
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Re: Sometimes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 12:06:17 PM AEST
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Dang this is good!!
Unreturned love...Is there anything more painful?
or longer lasting...?
Your emotions have a strong voice here, and have made it to the page more than intact.
Wishing you strength my friend. |
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Re: Sometimes
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th September 2007 @ 03:47:17 PM AEST
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A murel created by love's truly unobscured
vision of things one wishes to be. Very lovely.
thank you also for your comment . . .
bjps |
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Re: Sometimes
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 08:54:51 AM AEST
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Oh Baronhawk, Oh Baronhawk.......where are thou?
YPDC is not and never will be..............the same without our handsome, and loving Baronhawk!
I got diabetes Baronhawk and had to throw in the towel for alittle while..............but I'm back now............please come back to us Baronhawk, we miss you....and if you return we'll be as happy as can be!
Warm love,
Lovingcritters
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