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Reaching You
Contributed by
wakemeup6
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Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:40:06 PM in AEST
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Climbing up to reach you
I've got some time to kill
But when I reach the top,
You push me down the hill
Laying at the bottom
Crying in the sand
You smile and reach down
I offer you my hand
You grab it with some force
I hold it very tight
But again you push me down
These tears have blurred my sight
I'm scarred and bruised and bleeding
I'm so very sore
But you're staring down at me,
So I'll try again once more.
I swear the last time is the last time
I stare up at the sun
For you I'd try forever
But my time is almost done.
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wakemeup6
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Re: Reaching You
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:56:50 PM AEST
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wow very stronge and deep.
good job |
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Re: Reaching You
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by deadclown on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:58:35 PM AEST
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| Really good poem. I know you're only speakin metaphorically about climbing up the hill and being pushed down and that, but the way you've wrote this has given me images of this literally happening and it makes me want to help you up myself. Very well written |
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Re: Reaching You
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by fayray on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 01:28:38 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed it...been there myself |
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Re: Reaching You
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 02:25:35 PM AEST
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| I like this poem because it expresses how much you love this person and that you would give anything just to be with this person. This poem was very beautiful!.-luckycharm |
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Re: Reaching You
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by sohangme on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 05:27:28 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this...good job |
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Re: Reaching You
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by jerseysue on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 06:12:30 PM AEST
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| We have all climbed this hill at sometime, And like you we never give up. Think this poem is very inspirational, it tells us never to give up . Enjoyed it so much. Sue x |
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