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Circle of Life
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:27:52 PM in AEST
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Twisted emotions
Lost in a daze
Traversing quietly
Life’s endless maze
Broken promises
Torn pages of time
Scents of lavender
Flavor of lime
Scorched romances
Friendships gone
Through it all
We simply move on
Memories shift
Back to the days
Of lost innocence
Adrift in a haze
Circle of life
No beginning or end
Always and forever
Into us does blend
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NoSaint
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2006-07-19 12:27:52]
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Re: Circle of Life
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:30:43 PM AEST
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I have to say your writes are amazing.
Memories shift
Back to the days
Of lost innocence
Adrift in a haze
wow
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Re: Circle of Life
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 02:08:34 PM AEST
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FANTASTIC!!!! BRAVO! And rose at your feet. Words few and yet so meaningful too!
Warm love
consue |
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Re: Circle of Life
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by luckycharm on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 02:27:59 PM AEST
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| This poem was very deep and emotional. It caught my attention really quick and it shows that you are a great poet. Keep writing and I hope 2 see more of your work!.-luckycharm |
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Re: Circle of Life
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 05:26:06 PM AEST
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Leaning on the challenges but tempered with scents and flavors delicious, you have, with the ally of brevity displayed the "always and forever" of the "circle of life".
A poem to ponder and excite the reader's memories by recall and comparisons. Aimed at the heart with a bullseye shot. Nice work! |
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Re: Circle of Life
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by Sasha on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 10:00:27 PM AEST
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| Beautifully told, a lovely poem... |
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Re: Circle of Life
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 03:08:27 AM AEST
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Aww Shari, this was great. I didn't want it to end. Simply beautiful.
Peace, Laura |
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