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Upon a Star
Contributed by
bopeep
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Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wished upon a star that night.
One that shone with all its might.
And now I watch my dreams ignite,
As the pain flies away like a kite.
My love for you since that day grew.
As a picture of your affection you drew.
Now I watch my dream come true.
Just for a moment with you I will persue.
This sensation will never drain.
For if it did it will rain,
Rain drops of pain.
For without you life seems too plain.
I wished upon a star that night.
One that shone into my life.
And now I watch our dreams ignite.
For this love I will forever fight.
You wash away the pain like a wave washes away the sand.
Why it is I love you I may truly never understand.
I just know that through the brinks of time it will withstand.
Under the sun we will someday walk hand in hand.
I do not ask for you to be my valentine.
Just for you to be mine.
To hold me and say it will all be fine.
And as two lovers we shall dine.
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bopeep
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2003-02-10 09:30:00]
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Re: Upon a Star
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:24:33 PM AEST
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| awwww sweet:) |
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Re: Upon a Star
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by angel71 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 07:03:39 PM AEST
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| That was lovely... maybe if I got high I could write like that too lol :) |
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Re: Upon a Star
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by Dani on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:45:31 PM AEST
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This is beautiful....
"You wash away the pain like a wave washes away the sand.
Why it is I love you I may truly never understand.
I just know that through the brinks of time it will withstand.
Under the sun we will someday walk hand in hand. " <----Those are great lines!! :)
~Dani~ |
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Re: Upon a Star
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by Lionel on
Wednesday, 11th July 2007 @ 12:35:59 PM AEST
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I read a number of your poems, mostly melancholy; but, I especially liked this one. You are a talented poet. All you need is a selfless purpose for your talent's offering.
God quicken you; I pray. (Ephes.2:1) |
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