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Never more perfect is the world
Contributed by
voglin_tarhe
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Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 01:51:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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He sits in his room
Looking out the window
Waiting for his love's return
Closing his eyes he sees her face
She rides across town
Racing to her love's side
Feeling him call out to her
His essence is almost her's now
They crash together
Long sought is the embrace
Kisses and tears plentiful
Never more perfect is the world
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Re: Never more perfect is the world
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by wrdz on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 04:40:00 PM AEST
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| AAAAAAAh! But then comes reality to remind us that things really are a lot different. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Never more perfect is the world
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 03:18:07 AM AEST
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Perfect write, on a perfect love. It was short and very sweet. I enjoyed the read.
Peace, Laura |
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