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With You
Contributed by
crazygirl
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Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:23:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Darkness sets in,
as you fall away,
dragging my heart behind you,
My soul is torn,
as you smile,
not to me,
she is beautiful,
sweet,
so much more than me,
You take a vow in front of me,
that our love lives no longer,
you always felt alone,
as we sat fingers intwined,
together,
You feel whole,
as you hold her close,
you feel how i did,
with you....
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crazygirl
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2006-07-19 00:23:53]
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Re: With You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:14:09 PM AEST
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| This poem stirs deep emotions within me. To love someone and them not feel the same is one of the worst feelings in the world. I feel for you.....Mike |
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Re: With You
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by Ruby2sdy on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 09:45:48 AM AEST
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God, now this one I can relate to... quite painfully in fact... why do the people we love so much hurt us, instead of loving us in return? Time is a healer, thank god, or I'd still be well broken by now! Thanks for sharing,
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Re: With You
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by Catalina on
Tuesday, 30th September 2008 @ 02:41:09 AM AEST
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I have really felt this way a time or two. It passed. but i am here again.... Thanks for sharing, a deep, true, write.
CAT |
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