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Stupid Goth Girl
Contributed by
MG_Akela22090
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Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 08:11:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I never meant it to be this way….I never meant it to be so wrong. I miss what we were…I miss what was and what I can never have again. I miss the one I lost in the mix of it all.
I want everything back to the beginning, so I wouldn’t have to live this all down…so I wouldn’t have to feel this pain anymore.
I want to go back and erase myself completely.
Stupid Goth girl…she just cries.
Stupid Goth girl…watch her as she cuts herself under night skies.
Stupid Goth girl…no one loves her like the way she craves.
Stupid Goth girl…she’s not the same as the rest of us.
See her pain.
It makes us laugh.
I never meant it to get so far. I never meant it to hurt so badly, but these wounds won’t heal. They bleed right under my skin.
I never meant to let myself die like this, but I died in your arms and I left with him. My heart was packed away with his house and my body remains with you. My mind is lost somewhere in the darkness of time, as I try to remember what I was before.
Stupid Goth girl…she dresses in black to betray her love of white.
Stupid Goth girl…all she wants is to die.
Stupid Goth girl…hates everyone and wants nothing more than to be loved.
Stupid Goth girl…just wants someone at her funeral.
See her pain.
See her suffer.
I never meant to be this way. I just want to be what I feel inside. I don’t want to be blonde and I don’t want to be what everyone wants me to be. I want to be what I see in the mirror.
Maybe I’m depressed. Maybe I need help, but right now I just want to be loved for who I am.
I want someone to tell me it’s all worth while. That I will make something of myself. I just want a guy to say I’m beautiful and to mean every word. I just want to feel happy so maybe I won’t have to feel the darkness destroying my insides.
I just want to run.
I want to run far.
I want to run to the one I lost, because he will understand…
He will understand that I’ve forsaken God for the darkness.
He will understand why I cry.
He will understand what I run from.
I want you to see. I want you to hold me. I want to love again. I never meant to let it get this far and I’m sorry I’ll never be what I was before.
Because I’m a stupid Goth girl.
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MG_Akela22090
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Re: Stupid Goth Girl
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by shinji_kusa on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 08:18:07 PM AEST
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| i like this poem even tho i don't usualy consider un rhyming things to be poetry. i can identify with alot of it but a main reason i like it is cause it confuses me, the duality of the person. very good tho =) |
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Re: Stupid Goth Girl
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 01:50:00 AM AEST
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I really like this poem. its a good write. I can relate to a lot of the feelings.
luvs ya
jess |
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Re: Stupid Goth Girl
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by doug on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 07:43:16 AM AEST
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I , myself , think goth girls are awesome.
I hope you find the love you need and are accepted for who you. But if you can't find acceptance there remember you can always find it here. best wishes , doug |
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Re: Stupid Goth Girl
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by Satan_Is_Truth on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 06:43:58 PM AEST
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*crying inside and out*
OMG. i dont know what to say. But plz message me so we can talk privately.!! plz? |
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Re: Stupid Goth Girl
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by sally-heart-jack on
Friday, 27th October 2006 @ 04:22:19 PM AEST
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This is so awesome, and I really did like this.
Good job!
My favorite parts are:
Stupid Goth girl…she dresses in black to betray her love of white. [[ that brings such cool imagery to mind ^_^]
Stupid Goth girl…just wants someone at her funeral.
I never meant to be this way. I just want to be what I feel inside. I don’t want to be blonde and I don’t want to be what everyone wants me to be. I want to be what I see in the mirror.
I want someone to tell me it’s all worth while. That I will make something of myself. I just want a guy to say I’m beautiful and to mean every word.
On a critiquing note I think you should have taken what you wrote and tried to make it sound a little more poetic. I mean some lines were just a little blunt.
But I don't know, maybe that's what you were going for, and that's fine. :D
Either way, I really like this honestly, and I think you did great.
Good for you! ^_^ |
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