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We All Cried
Contributed by
kimmie_mac
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Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:26:22 PM in AEST
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A sin was committed on Sept. 11th, 2001
Lives of our loved ones were lost,
But don't you worry for your loss is ours,
and Justice will be served at all cost.
This day is sad and disbelieving,
and we've all shed many of tears.
All across the world,
someone has lost someone dear.
Today someone lost a husband,
a grandparent, son or father.
Or maybe they lost a mother, wife,
a friend or a daughter.
Always remember your American family,
will be by your side come what may.
And Osama Bin Landen will woe,
that he woke on this very day.
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kimmie_mac
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2006-07-18 19:26:22]
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Re: We All Cried
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by Ripper_Something_Unusual on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:42:30 PM AEST
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This sounds pretty cheesy, like a speech at the end of a GI Joe Cartoon. Each to their own but I dont really like it.
P.S: You dont really think Osama Bin Laden did it do you? Its quite obvious that this whole thing was planned by an organisation with much better resources. |
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Re: We All Cried
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by Kimmie_mac on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 09:32:03 PM AEST
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| We all have our own opinons and I respect that. Yea it may be cheesy but I am a woman and I like cheesy stuff. But thanks for reading it and giving me your opinons. I really don't know if it was osama but He hates america. It was either him or someone on his side that does listen to him. All I know is too many people died for nothing and I pray for the families. Have a good one and thanks again for writing me. |
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Re: We All Cried
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 10:26:46 PM AEST
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You are quite the writter, your poetry posses great conviction, it is very enjoyable to read. and most compelling. beautifuly done.
Ben |
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