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Prince Charming You Are Not
Contributed by
Randumbchit
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Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 05:43:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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At first when you meet me with chivilry
I thought we were af perfect match
you for me and I for you
but it was nothing but a figment
of my dreams and imagination
And after some careful investigation
I found what had (at fist)
caused my hesitation
You lacked them all-
The traits that made me fall
or the apperance of having them
for you
Copyright ©
Randumbchit
... [
2006-07-18 17:43:42]
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Re: Prince Charming You Are Not
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by deadclown on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 06:26:53 PM AEST
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| Sorry but I don't really understand what u r tring to say in this poem. A bit too confusing for me. Sorry |
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Re: Prince Charming You Are Not
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 07:31:13 PM AEST
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hmmm very interesting write
I don't think deadclown understood what your saying .lol well i am glad you found out that guy was no prince charming before it was too late.
good write |
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Re: Prince Charming You Are Not
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 09:11:34 PM AEST
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| Nice idea here. If anything, it seems more like the teaser to a really good poem. You've got something here that, while short, would benefit from having it extended. A few typos here and there, but otherwise I liked that it made me think about. |
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