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Just Plain Broken
Contributed by
wakemeup6
on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 09:33:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Just plain broken.
Without you, I go insane.
When I see you, I feel this pain.
Our love that once shone,
Is now conclusively gone.
I love you
I need you
I want you
Ill never forget you.
This love that won't change, is the love that I seek.
Though my promise to you, Is not nearly as weak.
You are my heart
Though you've smashed it to bits,
You gave me these feelings
I wasnt sure existed.
I love you.
Copyright ©
wakemeup6
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2006-07-18 09:33:11]
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Re: Just Plain Broken
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by Randyjohnson on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 09:50:06 AM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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Re: Just Plain Broken
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 11:14:35 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC... Sad write ..your pain is so evident in this write. Keep them coming.
Jenni |
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Re: Just Plain Broken
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by bluewolf on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 12:08:08 PM AEST
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| great poem. i know how that is ive just had my heart broken but i cant forget him. |
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Re: Just Plain Broken
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 09:24:25 PM AEST
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Nice, I can relate to this poem
-Laura |
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