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I'm So Confused
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
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Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 10:08:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My friend...that's all
You say we can't be more
To be near you I would do anything
So Sadly, tearily, I agree
But now I see you
All we do is wave
Like passerby's on a train
We hardly talk, we never hang
Are we still friends?
Or have we become
Just aquaintances in the wind
Only acknoledging our presences
With a mear nod or wave
Am I just clinging to something that is no more?
Was it even?
I just don't know anymore...
I just don't know anything...
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DesolantDreamer
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2006-07-17 22:08:42]
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Re: I'm So Confused
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by -xhaleyx- on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 12:07:36 AM AEST
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believe it or not, i know exactly the feeling. This is a very good write, its short and to the point, and was easy to relate to. Veyr nicley done.
-x haley x- |
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Re: I'm So Confused
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 02:01:45 AM AEST
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Very sad but well exspressed.
luv, huggs,
emy
I've been there. |
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Re: I'm So Confused
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by The_Unknown on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 02:51:44 AM AEST
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I know exactly what you mean. This is a very well expressed poem. Keep up the excellent work!
luvs ya
Jess |
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Re: I'm So Confused
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by randumbchit on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 02:43:50 PM AEST
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| ive been like that bfore the best hing is to talk it out if this continues to happen try to move on. I know this is hard becuase for me it took me a year. |
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Re: I'm So Confused
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th July 2006 @ 12:52:48 PM AEST
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| Great write and deep sadness in this piece....Mike |
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