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cant think of a title that suits
Contributed by
judasman
on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 05:44:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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darkness calls out to me
telling me to follow
so cold here
im all alone
listening to the darkness
i died some time ago
left the world behind
to hold you one more time
and tell you that i love you
is all thats left for me now
i listen to the darkness
telling me to follow
deeper inside me
so cold here
im all alone
i have no one
but the darkness still calls
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judasman
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2006-07-17 17:44:38]
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Re: cant think of a title that suits
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by deadclown on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 06:35:03 PM AEST
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| From the 6th line to the 10th reads a bit confusing. I know what ur tying to say but the wording seems too rushed together. Other than that I think it's a good piece and I like the fact that we don't know exactly what the darkness wants. |
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Re: cant think of a title that suits
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by randumbchit on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 08:25:02 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed that fact that people can put what meaning they want into your poem. Great use of imagry. |
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Re: cant think of a title that suits
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by randumbchit on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 08:25:06 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed that fact that people can put what meaning they want into your poem. Great use of imagry. |
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