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Gentle Manly Messed Up
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:37:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Yea, I'm so messed up
Yea, and so are my friends
At the party we like it
Let's do it again
Sometime soon
Underneath the grinning moon
There's a man in there
I can feel his stare
Yea, we happen to find
A bunch of honeys waiting
I see her walking in
And I'm contemplating
Hey little sweetheart
Let me have this dance
Put me under with notice
Stuck lightly and I like your pants
Yea, I'm so messed up
And I'm laughing with my friends
They be wonderin' where we go
They be lookin' to see where I went
Nevermind little darling
Underneath the light of the moon
I'll see you some other time
For now its time for me to head to the back room
We take it lightly
And the papers' burnin' brightly
This could get crazy
Especially since we're so messed up
I hope you didn't notice
I told them I didn't like her make-up
I hope the tap doesn't run dry
Oh me and oh my my
Stuck outside grinning
As the world is messed up and it just keeps on spinnin'
You've given up on me
This is how things are gonna be
Volatile and corrupted
You've been thoroughly interrupted
I hope with all the things I have in me
Messed up beyond imagining
Hurling myself towards disaster
Chaotic I wait there until after
Take you to the back room
Underneath the moon
There's a man in there
I seem to have grown into his stare
Probably
Possibly
I am all the things I never thought I'd be
You're so pretty
And I'm just pretty messed up
Kiss me lightly on the cheek
I am "gentle manly" and I will definitely fill your cup
Copyright ©
Exodus
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2006-07-17 16:37:15]
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Re: Gentle Manly Messed Up
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by Catalina on
Sunday, 21st September 2008 @ 01:30:21 PM AEST
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| I really could relate to the write. The heading is what threw me off. but the poem was great! |
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Re: Gentle Manly Messed Up
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th September 2008 @ 09:16:40 AM AEST
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| I though this was going to be a depressing poem but it wasn't . It was good though! |
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Re: Gentle Manly Messed Up
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by lnnie on
Friday, 3rd October 2008 @ 05:49:43 AM AEST
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Loved this poem. Wow. The writing the honesty. the courage. Poetry is saying what other people won't.
Keep writing!
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