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Request of a killer
Contributed by
deadclown
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Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:20:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Take my eyes away from me
I don't want to see no more
Cut my tongue from out my mouth
Take my words and make them yours
Rub your pain into my wounds
and cover them with tears of salt
Put a rope around my neck
Sorry
This was all my fault
Love what you are doing now
The way I did when I had you
Feel the passion burn inside
knowing what you're going to do
Scatch the knife right down my back
Cut me 'til I start to bleed
Hold my taste inside your mouth
Then tell me this is what you need
Role reversal's needed now
Be glad you were the one to live
I've done too much
Can't kill no more
The hunger's gone
So take this gift
Kill me when you think it's time
Destroy the hate I hold within
Enjoy the moment time again
cos now my end's where you begin
Copyright ©
deadclown
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2006-07-17 16:20:53]
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Re: Request of a killer
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by judasman on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 05:54:06 PM AEST
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| every time i read this i keep seeing the scene at the end of return of the jedi where the emperor wants luke skywalker to strike down darth vader and take his place at his side if that makes any sense. interesting write |
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Re: Request of a killer
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by Keilantra on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 07:41:10 PM AEST
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The ending was cliched. I didn't think it did the poem justice, bt it ws good nontheless.
xXx
~kei |
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