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A response to something called Manipulate.
Contributed by
-xhaleyx-
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Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 03:57:56 PM in AEST
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goodbyepoetry
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Go ahead and write,
exactly what you think of me.
You act as if nothing is your fault,
But you'll never begin to see.
We all have our problmes,
Its how life gets its bad.
Because of this, it hurts to see
The good friendship we once had.
Things had happened,
And we both have changed.
And we cant seem to fix them,
Maybe they are outranged.
I really dont know,
what to think of you anymore.
And yes, i still remember
All the things I said before.
Im really sorry,
I was such a bad friend.
But im sorry i never helped,
With what you expected to be said.
We've grown father apart.
And confusion stirs within.
I dont want this anymore,
Is where i could begin.
Maybe its just me,
Maybe Im the one who is wrong
But to save us both the drama,
Ending this will probably keep us strong.
I'll miss the old times,
And things we both have said.
But i cant take this anymore,
I want this to end.
So goodbye to our friendship,
I've walked away slower then should.
Im sorry for everything,
And if I could solve your problems, I would.
Copyright ©
-xhaleyx-
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2006-07-17 15:57:56]
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Re: A response to something called Manipulate.
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by MrPerfect on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 05:06:21 PM AEST
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great poem i didnt notice the whole thing was rhyming untill the end keep up the good work Haleyfer
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Re: A response to something called Manipulate.
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by randumbchit on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 08:30:21 PM AEST
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great subtle use of ryme scheme
some poems just sond like they come out of doctor suess books |
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Re: A response to something called Manipulate.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 12:12:59 AM AEST
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Please edit for spelling, grammar, syntax, and everything else that corrolates either directly or indirectly to literature.
Try to have your writing make sense.
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Re: A response to something called Manipulate.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th July 2006 @ 12:13:47 AM AEST
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Please edit for spelling, grammar, syntax, and everything else that corrolates either directly or indirectly to literature.
Try to have your writing make sense.
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