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Contributed by
PoeticHybrid
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Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:39:36 PM in AEST
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To count the ways I hate thee
Would require you to count higher than three
You will never see the world through my eyes
For your IQ would have to rise
So far below societies norms
Too dumb to notice so no one informs
You're far too much fun to just observe
All you get you don't deserve
So quit tring to prove your worth
To do this you would be under 6 feet of earth
So do us all a favor and just comply
Just stop breathing, stop thinking, just die!!!
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Re: Random
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by sohangme on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 12:35:23 AM AEST
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| did you have someone in mind there? hehe....good read |
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Re: Random
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by Davinah on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:00:13 AM AEST
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Very well done!
~D~ |
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Re: Random
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 12:31:46 AM AEST
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Well it's written really well.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Random
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by one-curly-fry on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 03:23:45 AM AEST
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OMG! Hope this isn't about anyone - wouldn't like to think you hate anyone that much! lol
Very good write though and it's not often I come across an angry poetry that rhymes and is as powerful as this!
Good work!
- Tim |
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