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The Escape
Contributed by
lovestruck
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Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:37:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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at night when I dream
I escape and run to you
we hold hand and run
through the park
where we once played
we fall among the grass
laughing, talking
just happy to be near
we smile and hold eachother close
knowing it shouldnt ever end
but then come the dark clouds and rain
and the alarm clock sounds
and I know I cant make it stop
cause now youre fading away
and I scream out and grab for you
but now I'm fading away too
the I wake up hoping youre laying next to me
but youre not, and it hurts and I miss you even more
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lovestruck
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2006-07-16 23:37:41]
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Re: The Escape
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by PoeticHybrid on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:41:07 PM AEST
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| Good write. It really shows your hurt well. |
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Re: The Escape
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by sohangme on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 12:37:10 AM AEST
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| the waking up is the hardest huh? good job |
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Re: The Escape
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by Davinah on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 04:01:54 AM AEST
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Waking up to reality can be painful at times...
Very well done!
~D~ |
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Re: The Escape
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by Angel16 on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 12:32:34 PM AEST
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*Very good write; lovestruck. I definitely could
relate to ur poem. |
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