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Three little pigs
Contributed by
gurlytye
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Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 03:51:27 PM in AEST
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Pull the string to start the mower
Nothing happened, pull it again
The blades spin to cut the grass
Back and forth across the yard
Pull it backwards up the hill
Oh my lord you slipped and fell
Pull your foot from between the blades
Rush you quick the hospital waits
Seven long days
Two tedious surgeries
A million tears
And now there are only three
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Re: Three little pigs
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 06:06:42 PM AEST
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:P
I would imagine that he would find it amusing, yes.
At least his accident didn't hurt his sense of humour. Not that I thought it would.
Cute write.
*hugs*
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Re: Three little pigs
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by Spike on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 05:45:22 AM AEST
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Well done. I learnt more about Naz's accident, injury and recovery in 12 well placed lines than I had from the regular news reports on this site.
Now this is how the 6.00 new should be read!
Spike |
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