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Sleeping Angels
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
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Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 12:02:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Within the mist of heartache, lies the gentle truth of peace,
Tired now, and weary, the angels gladly sleep,
The distance may be lonely, from here to your side,
But this world is full of love, carried on the tide,
And when this ship a-sails, it shall head straight for your shore,
Where you silently await me, until you wait no more,
And although this day is lonely, the night shall soon be here,
This night I won’t have to dream of holding you so near,
My voice calls out your name, a burden carried on the wind,
As the heavens start to judge us, believing that we’ve sinned,
If they wish to condemn me, condemn me they can,
For this love is eternal, it has the whole world in its span.
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-07-16 12:02:06]
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Re: Sleeping Angels
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by ManInTheMask on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 12:04:46 PM AEST
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One word...Beautiful =)
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Re: Sleeping Angels
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by Strawberry on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 12:42:54 PM AEST
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| That was very good. It was deep. keep it up. |
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Re: Sleeping Angels
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 06:40:11 PM AEST
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flowed well was a wonderful write
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Re: Sleeping Angels
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 06:58:46 PM AEST
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Wonderful!
I think your writes always flow so wonderfully, and they almost seem effortless they work so well.
Lovely write. Again the last lines were just right.
*hugs*
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Re: Sleeping Angels
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by Sasha on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 12:51:58 AM AEST
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| A lovely poem indeed, deep and sensitive... |
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