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My Ghosts
Contributed by
Urizen
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Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 06:19:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I look upon the stars tonight,
They appeared pale, gripped by fright,
Gripped by envy, twisted and turned,
Ripped and creatored, shattered and torn,
I gaze upon violent storms,
That wander near but fade too soon,
I hear the carnage I see the blood,
I've angered the gods the rivers flood,
I stare upon darkening clouds,
That gather in the corners of my crumbling mind,
They stain and they grow, Like a stone they roll,
Over my dreams, my hopes,
They are my ghosts.
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Urizen
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2006-07-16 06:19:47]
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Re: My Ghosts
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 07:26:04 PM AEST
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Very sad...But very good write...
God Bless! |
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Re: My Ghosts
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by Junker on
Thursday, 18th September 2008 @ 10:54:14 AM AEST
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nice poem.
I am not sure, but in line 4, did you mean to write "cratered" as in a hole? |
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