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Something Is Wrong
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 02:39:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I know that no one knows
what's really on my mind
thoughts that are so deep
some that are sweet
and
some that aren't so nice,
Been twisted for so long
at night is when I rise
for me
it's normal to be off balance
sometimes I think I need drama to survive.
Been asking questions for so long
with answers that are unknown
sanity and reasoning ebbs and flows
InnerVisions spark and explode,
make love and bask in the glow
wanna do it all night long
but emotionallly I am null and void
I think there's something wrong.
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secretwind
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2006-07-16 02:39:32]
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Re: Something Is Wrong
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 06:07:40 AM AEST
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Hmmm interesting write.
sad yet
I think you need to talk to someone to get whatever thats bothering you.
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Re: Something Is Wrong
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by brew on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:45:08 AM AEST
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Lost, and lonliness, is felt and appearing in this write.! As if the inner was given to one, yet maybe not given back the same.! Try smiling.....even if the pain is there.....Hope it gets better.! You know ALL things happen for reasons.
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