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the truth
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
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Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 12:43:41 AM in AEST
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put on another face
the original-such a disgrace
leave no illusions
leave no trace
hide behind yet another layer of lace
my love, it's a pleasure to see you
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glassicallyunsuperficial
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2006-07-16 00:43:41]
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Re: the truth
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by deadclown on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 05:28:16 AM AEST
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| Nice and simple but effective. Not too keen on the very last line though. Poem didn't need it. Good though |
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Re: the truth
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by Kodes on
Friday, 12th September 2008 @ 12:24:56 PM AEST
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| I like how its nice and simple and it does get the point across, though i do like the last line. Even though it doesnt ryhme i thik it shows in more detail what you were thinking when you wrote the poem. |
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