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A 'Normal' Girl
Contributed by
Bamber
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Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 05:23:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm just a normal girl
Who sings out of tune
But sings anyway
Let's her notes be heard
Though they lack the beauty some possess
I'm gonna let everyone hear what I have to say
I'm gonna make those sad smile real big
'Cause I'm just a normal girl
Who has so much to say
I'm just a normal girl
Who can't dance
But dances anyway
Just like no one is even watching
I don't care, I don't care
I'm gonna let everyone hear what I have to say
I'm gonna make those sad smile real big
'Cause I'm just a normal girl
Who has so much to say
You can laugh and you can poke fun
But I'm telling you, I'm telling you
I'm just a normal girl
Normal
I want to fly away
I want to let everyone hear me
I'll scream if I want to
I'll fly away if I need to
Because I'm just a normal girl, just a normal girl
And if this isn't normal
Then I don't know what is
Because you can laugh and poke fun
But I'll still claim to be
A normal girl
Copyright ©
Bamber
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by doug on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 07:27:59 PM AEST
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| Normal in my opinion is nothing more than the arbitrary standard of a temporary majority. I know of few if any who were truly liked for being their true selfs , unless their selves happened to be agreeable to the falseness of their peers and in a world where differences are more often met with hate then acceptance I applaud you for being forthright and unique even if you have placed those traits under the banner of normalcy. I wish you luck and hope that you find individuality less dangerous an undertaking than I myself have. |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 11:49:05 AM AEST
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Dear Bamber,
WELCOME! TO YPDC..........We are so glad you have joined us here. You're going to love the view!!!WELCOME ABOARD! We're like one big family , loving each other and supporting one another.
You my dear Bamber say you are Normal, and your poem was far more than that. You are a Miracle.....from the time of your birth, until your death........you are unique. There will never be another Bamber ever again!
Enjoyed your write very much
Warm love
consue |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 04:58:18 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. I love how secure your sound in your own, flawed skin. It's so refreshing to hear somebody not giving in to conformity and buying into the impossible standard of perfection. |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th October 2006 @ 07:30:56 PM AEST
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| Its a beautiful poem. it makes one realize that being normal can be very beautiful and wonderful |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by Errious on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:47:01 AM AEST
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That is ace! Was it designed as a song? Cool 'feel good' poem. Well done.
Tom
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by NDean on
Wednesday, 6th December 2006 @ 11:50:34 AM AEST
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Very good poem. Really explains how some of us are thinking. Ace.
WELL DONE
YEY!! |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by simonedontplay on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 09:44:40 AM AEST
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| i really liked it , it was relate -able, an true |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by LauraMary on
Saturday, 30th August 2008 @ 05:10:54 AM AEST
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I completely enjoyed reading this.
Good, good job. |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by Purple_Cherry on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 05:47:16 AM AEST
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"Who can't dance, but dances anyway" That's a great line. I love the poem; it has a song-y feel to it. You're a normal girl with the guts to be herself. Great poem.
~Cherry |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by corpsman2000 on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 06:32:53 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem with an excellent message |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by XxLifeOfATeenxX on
Monday, 15th February 2010 @ 02:05:13 PM AEST
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| such a good poem . i could relate to it |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by Sheveg on
Sunday, 27th June 2010 @ 12:23:51 PM AEST
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I would have liked to read this when I was a girl. Even though I'm 63, I try to be a normal girl now. Thanks.
Sherry |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by lilou on
Saturday, 11th September 2010 @ 12:04:35 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. Its so good! I think you are an amazing poet! |
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 10:18:19 PM AEST
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Your poem has wit
your poem has meaning
inside is hiding
that girl that's bleeding
But, I'm messaging you to inform you
of what you already knew
that a normal girl can only be found
in that one special place called......YOU
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Re: A 'Normal' Girl
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by Depression-chan on
Saturday, 1st January 2011 @ 08:14:56 PM AEST
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| I like it. :D Ah, the simple life of a normal girl... :) |
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