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A THOUSAND APOLOGIES WITHOUT SORRY
Contributed by
bigbadblinkybill
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Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 12:50:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Knowing life has no inbetween
I've made my mark
its for all eyes seen,
Your eyes are blurred by youthful looks
but my mind is old
like dusted books.
some things i find are best unsaid,
like feeling down
collapsed inside my head
but my life is no roulette
I have no numbers
for you to bet
never have i met someone like you
and to loose you now
that day i'll rue
so pull the leaver
the jackpots played
but its too late
the gambles made
Copyright ©
bigbadblinkybill
... [
2006-07-15 12:50:26]
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Re: A THOUSAND APOLOGIES WITHOUT SORRY
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by Keilantra on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 01:58:20 PM AEST
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Wonderfull!
Your eyes are blurred by youthful looks
but my mind is old
like dusted books.
*sigh*
that was said well,
xXx
~kei |
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Re: A THOUSAND APOLOGIES WITHOUT SORRY
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by deadclown on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 06:18:40 PM AEST
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Emotional. Tell ur sad and maybe certain things are best left unsaid especially if the words are hurtful. Other things. Important things. Things that worry you should be spoken about. Give others some credit maybe.
Quite a lot of gambling references here too.
Is this the only language you think this person you write of will understand ? |
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Re: A THOUSAND APOLOGIES WITHOUT SORRY
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by Strawberry on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 08:44:33 AM AEST
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| Very well written. Keep up the great work. |
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