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Where Does It Lead?
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:39:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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There’s this path that I follow, it leads to your door,
It’s run down and dirty, but I’ve walked it before,
It leaves me degraded, bedraggled and lost,
But still I stumble down it, prepared to pay the cost.
There’s this road that I walk down, it leads me to you,
It’s deserted and twisting, but I have to make do,
It makes me feel hollow, and empty inside,
But at least the road is clear; there’s nowhere left to hide.
There’s this tube that I’m riding, it leads to your street,
It’s hot and it’s sticky, and standing hurts my feet,
It leaves me so tired, and gasping for air,
But I’m thinking of my destination, and the fact that you wait there.
There’s these stairs that I’m climbing; they lead to your bed,
They’re old and they’re squeaky, so softly I tread,
The day has been hard, as has my journey home,
But as I climb in beside you, I’m glad I’m not alone.
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Ruby2sdy
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Re: Where Does It Lead?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 03:51:28 AM AEST
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AAAWwwwwwww this is so sweet, beautifull and a wee bit funny.
Great job.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Where Does It Lead?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 06:38:27 AM AEST
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| Hey there.. thanks for commenting on my poems. i like this one a lot. i bet a fair few people can relate to this. chris. |
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Re: Where Does It Lead?
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by ButchCorpuz on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:45:04 PM AEST
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Two words:
Absolutely stunning!
-Butch (speechless)
-Betrayer of Hope |
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Re: Where Does It Lead?
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 07:14:58 PM AEST
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great rhythm and rhyme-
It's nice to have that at the end of a long lourney home-
very nice~
B |
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