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Eyes
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:07:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sparkling eyes, tell me lies,
So I may hate you, and despise,
Flashing eyes, filled with pain,
I never want to see you again,
Staring eyes, that show despair,
I don't love you, I don't care,
Crying eyes, swollen and red,
I no longer want to share your bed,
Doting eyes, that plead me to stay,
I won't , I can't, I am leaving today,
Smiling eyes, you have moved on,
I am now lonely, You have someone,
Silent eyes, full of emotion,
I wish I still had your devotion,
Laughing eyes, full of glee,
I wonder if you ever loved me,
Crying eyes, are mine alone,
I try to call you on the phone,
Hate filled eyes, a message they send,
You left me , no more, It is the end,
The eyes have it, look where it led,
You are happy,I wish I were dead,
So Sparkling eyes, tell me lies,
I have regret, Its in my EYES
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jerseysue
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Re: Eyes
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by PoeticHybrid on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:21:47 AM AEST
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| Very nice write. Very emotional. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Eyes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:29:37 AM AEST
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Well it makes sense to me but if your just tinkering then I'd hate see u upset.
great writing either way.
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Eyes
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by TheSpiritx on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 02:45:50 AM AEST
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I like the recurring theme that binds it all together - the eyes, of course.
Very straightforward rhyming and simple to digest. A light read that left me pleased with the poem in whole at the end. Thanks for submitting it, jersey. |
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Re: Eyes
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 07:36:37 PM AEST
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I and many others would find this most relevant-
7th couplet.. is a familiar one of feelings and such.
I like this.. a lot-
Billy |
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