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PAIN

Contributed by roxygirl on Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 10:46:41 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

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Re: PAIN (User Rating: 1 )
by weepingprophet on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 01:21:49 AM AEST
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I am sorry for your trials, I send my empathy to you. However, the purpose of this site is to critique and comment on the writing of others. As for your writing, it was horrific. You need to use spell check, find a better way to get out your anger than common cursing. Every single individual on this site has problems, they feel pain, they've been let down, ect....I have heard every word of this piece before because it is true, it is a bitter reality to so many people. You have made a wise choice in letting your honest emotions out into the open, speaking of your vulnerability and lack of place and purpose in the world. However, I do believe that you could have conveyed your emotions in a unique and artistic way. For starters, expand your vocabulary, look into metaphors and toy with the notion of observing other walks of life in which to write about it may just offer you a sense of releif. Most importantly my friend, remember that you are not a mistake unless you choice to be, you are not worthless unless you waste your potential and whether anybody else loves you or not you exist and you are worthy of self-love. Keep trudging through your trails with perserverance, it will pay off eventually. If you ever need to talk or would like help writing something, feel free to send me a message through the site. I would be glad to offer any suggestions as far as metaphors or helping you with vocabulary as I recognize that it is not everybody's strong suit.

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