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Souls Crossing
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 10:00:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Souls crossing in the night
Vapors of love by starlight
Entwined in romantic kiss
Eternally waiting for this
Two hearts heated by passions fire
Giving in to a moments desire
To only part by dawns show
Never truly the other know
One a mist from Heaven’s shore
One lost nothing more
Washing away with the tide
But oh they enjoyed the ride
Leaving only memories
They will forever be
Haunted by these
With every evening breeze
Souls crossing in the night
Vapors of love by starlight
Touching then drifting away
Lighting up the whole bay
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NoSaint
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2006-07-14 22:00:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Souls Crossing
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 10:22:12 PM AEST (User
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Mysterious Intrique of Delight!
Gave me goosepimples as those souls met in the night.
I'm always amazed Shari at the few words you use.........and yet your poems are so clear, a sure sign of high intelligence, and most enjoyable too!
Warm love
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Re: Souls Crossing
(User Rating: 1 ) by blackpoetryqueen on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 10:42:12 PM AEST (User
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I like this poem! it may be short but the words you used are very strong and its very easy to follow. Excellent Job Sweetie! |
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Re: Souls Crossing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shmokin on
Sunday, 16th July 2006 @ 03:52:02 AM AEST (User
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A well painted picture, thanx for sharing :-) |
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Re: Souls Crossing
(User Rating: 1 ) by artjunkiekyle on
Wednesday, 26th July 2006 @ 03:06:05 PM AEST (User
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wow this is a powerful poem. i like it a lot and your emotions are really conveyed in a powerful tone. loved it!!!!
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Re: Souls Crossing
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 07:12:56 PM AEST (User
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I love this,it is written beautifully..
Great!
God Bless! |
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