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Flames
Contributed by
keilantra
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Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 01:17:32 PM in AEST
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I hark you said my words were poison
You tell me I’m a drug
Breath me in –intoxicating
Now I’m coursing through your veins.
Exhale me, I’m I shiver of smoke
Watch me spiral away;
But my after affects wear on,
I leave you going up in flames.
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keilantra
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2006-07-14 13:17:32]
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Re: Flames
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 01:23:10 PM AEST
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Interesting write....
"Food for thought"
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Re: Flames
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 01:54:22 PM AEST
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Appropriate title. Wonderfully conceived metaphoric invitation to continue to be ... addicted to your words. Almost a warning invitation. Great write, kei!
wabl
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Re: Flames
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by sohangme on
Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 05:24:07 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this! good job |
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Re: Flames
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by redsleeve on
Tuesday, 9th September 2008 @ 07:10:27 AM AEST
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| good post. |
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