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Just wait a little longer
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:33:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Just wait a little longer
Perhaps another scathing day
And your eyes will mist over
In awe
In recognition
In glory
And you won't be able to tear them away from me
Just wait a little longer
A sobbing week or maybe two
And you will be more inspired
To smile
To laugh
To cry
Than you have ever been in your life, I promise
Just wait a little longer
A few months worth of pain
And you won't know where you put
Your mind
Your soul
Your heart
Because they will flutter out of your control
Just wait a little longer
A near-fatal year at most
And everything you knew will change
Into beauty
Into amazement
Into desire
And you will know how I have felt for so very long
Just wait a little longer
And I will make you love me
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
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2006-07-14 00:33:35]
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Re: Just wait a little longer
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by JordonsBaby17 on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 12:44:06 AM AEST
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| this is a really nicely written poem. i really like the feelings you put into it. |
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Re: Just wait a little longer
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by Davinah on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 01:09:47 AM AEST
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Very well done!
~D~ |
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Re: Just wait a little longer
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by dougnut on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 01:55:30 AM AEST
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Great write from your heart,
Fantastic read,
the emotion poured out by you
in this poem , is well captured by the reader .
well done.
hugs from Doug.:-) |
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Re: Just wait a little longer
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 11:05:13 AM AEST
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| A passionate write from deep within your soul. I've felt the same way once. Good poem. Kimberly |
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Re: Just wait a little longer
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by Tricia on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 03:46:06 PM AEST
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| This is such a great poem. Cant wait to read more... |
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